First+Speech

My first speech is about ' How to Choose Cosmetic Products Based On Your Skin Types'

For **introduction**, I think I do not even have an attention getter. This is because I was busy getting suited to be recorded by the video recorder well. My bad. But for the overview, I've stated it clearly. Next, the **body**. I came up with 3 main points and I delivered them all. My weakness is I have to look at the small note I bring together because I tend to forget when I'm in front of the audience. I really need to workout more on this. For the conclusion, I have wrap it up nicely ( I think ...). But obviously I need to give a short but leaving impacts conclusion. Last but not least, my delivery. I faced the audience throughout my speech. The lacking on the video recorded is I kept moving here and there and made me a not-so-good video. I also made eye-contact with the audience. I am glad that some of them pay much attention. :) But I got distracted by some of the audiences at first because they're mimicked my hand style during the speech.
 * Language** that I used mostly is the daily-used language used by others. They understood me well. Maybe the pronounciation off for some parts and also some minor grammar errors.

Overall, I think I had put efforts on my speech. My weaknesses is I am not used to speak in English as a daily language. I have to practice more to be a best speaker!

Comments from my group members :-

COMMENTS FROM SITI NURATIEAH :-

COMMENTS FROM SITI HAJAR :- 1. Volume -I can hear you voice. However, you can improve it better.

 2. Pitch -The pitch is quite okay and energetic because you had an experience deal with customer because you know about cosmetic well.

 3. Rate - I can hear your words sequence by sequence. Improve it!

 4. Emotion - Your emotion is okay, suit with what you want to present. However, do not look at your note frequently, it will show you in nervous state. I also in that situation. =)

 5. Pronunciation - Your pronounciation is okay, however I know you can do better pronounciation if you can control the nervous. =)

I know you can do it better. Try it for the next task. (n_n)